you are.
standing face to face with the devil
half wanting to run away
half wanting to give in.
the tease says she’s in control
but really, she’s the toy.
being played with.
manipulated.
and yet
she lets it happen.
it’s the pain–
it’s the power–
or the lack of it
that drives her wanting for more.
hypnotized
confused
lost in a vacuum
of space enclosed.
her heart is dead.
it stopped beating.
but her head is hazed in a dream
of an empty reality
of uncontrollable desires
of deceit
of constant turmoil
of endless instability.
the manipulator has met her match–
the devil.
the punisher.
of eyes deeming with hate.
and cruelty.
and dominion.
existentialist motives
he feeds on slavery.
and apparently..so does she.
shifting between realities–
is she in control?
she holds the choice,
or so it seems.
Abuse never tasted so good.
I don’t know you.
and yet,
i already know–
all i need to know.
you are.
…
…
…
my sadist.
August 8th, 2007 at 7:17 am
yung nais niyang ipahatid ay malalim, i mean baka may something nakatago under those words… but I don’t know, depende siguro sa nagbabasa, at gawa nang ako ang nagbabasa at masyadong madaming naiisip na kung anu-ano, its superficial na rin…hindi sa mababaw ang ipinahahatid nito, kundi ang ibig kong sabihin ay madaling maintindihan kung literal ang ating pagintindi sa iyong obra… yes, yes… therefore, it’s deep and superficial at the same time! ^_^ feeling ko wala akong right na mag-comment dito.. haha!!! once in a lifetime… kaya mahaba na mel… ^_^
August 9th, 2007 at 3:26 am
Wow ate! That’s so deep!!!
Maedyo maganda sya pero may creeopy factor.
Hehehehe
Nice Poem!
August 10th, 2007 at 8:41 am
bobbie is right, deep and superficial at the same time. written well. but who really knows what it means right.. hm. here’s your comment. i have nothing more to say.
September 7th, 2007 at 1:20 pm
lucid diction i would say. loved your lines. let me read more, okie?